I really liked your speech, it was very clear and informative. I also liked how you mentioned some mistakes to avoid and I thought it was cool how you brought all the steps together in the end to wrap it up. Overall, this is a very good dry run of your speech, if anything I would just add a little more to it so you hit the three minute mark.
I really enjoyed listening to your speech. I liked that you broke down the steps into very clear instructions, and you gave us clear visuals by standing up and demonstrating. I also liked how you explained why each step is important for a successful pass. I would love to hear you speak with more enthusiasm on your final run!
I liked how your explanation was clear and easy to follow. All of the demonstrations were helpful as well. I think a little more energy would elevate the speech and show your enthusiasm for the sport.
I loved when you let him smell and he just did not care. I thought you seemed really knowledgeable and had good facts. I also thought it was cool you actually demonstrated on your dog. The only improvement I would say is to just try and make it a little more fluid, but I also know it’s just your rough draft.
I thought this was a very good speech and also your dog is adorable. You’re tone was very clear and it was easy to tell that you knew exactly what you were talking about. I also really like how you emphasized the importance of making it a positive experience for the dog. This was very good for a rough draft, also please give the dog another treat for me he is literally the cutest.
What a fantastic skill to teach! Many people do not know how to trim dogs’ nails, and it’s a valuable skill for pet owners to have. I liked that you listed every item you will need before beginning the process, and you broke the steps down very clearly. For your final draft, make sure to run through your speech a couple of times making sure it’s nice and smooth.
I thought that was really good. Your voice was nice and clear. I also thought you did really good explaining all of your steps. It did make me want to journal! I think if you could it could be helpful to include maybe how you stay motivated or how you remember to do it everyday.
I really like the skill you chose, I think you did a very good job of explaining not only how to journal but why it is important and how it can be used to both just rant and point out some positive aspects of your day/week. Overall, I think the structure of your speech flowed very well and I thought it was a very well done rough draft.
This was a great speech. I liked the organization of the speech and the clear delivery. I think it could be beneficial to include more info about the benefits of journalling, it’s such a helpful practice!
that is a really cool skill. I liked how you showed the other earrings you had made (they were cute!). You spoke clearly and it didn’t seem like you were reading off of a script. I would say maybe try and find a longer one so you could demonstrate making the earring in the final video
I liked that you told your audience that it’s much easier than it looks to make earrings. At first, I was shocked you could teach us this skill in such a short video, but you did a great job of breaking down the steps. You mentioned were a few of your items were from which was great! I would love to know where to purchase everything I will need for this project (craft store? online?…)
This was a great speech and such a creative skill to teach. I liked how you delivered the speech in a casual, conversational way. I also liked the simple and clear explanation of the skill. If it’s possible to show how you use the tool on an earring, I think that would be helpful to see.
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here’s my link!
https://youtu.be/dhhuKu8MigA
I really liked your speech, it was very clear and informative. I also liked how you mentioned some mistakes to avoid and I thought it was cool how you brought all the steps together in the end to wrap it up. Overall, this is a very good dry run of your speech, if anything I would just add a little more to it so you hit the three minute mark.
I really enjoyed listening to your speech. I liked that you broke down the steps into very clear instructions, and you gave us clear visuals by standing up and demonstrating. I also liked how you explained why each step is important for a successful pass. I would love to hear you speak with more enthusiasm on your final run!
I liked how your explanation was clear and easy to follow. All of the demonstrations were helpful as well. I think a little more energy would elevate the speech and show your enthusiasm for the sport.
https://youtu.be/UgUSJBRU6Ow
I loved when you let him smell and he just did not care. I thought you seemed really knowledgeable and had good facts. I also thought it was cool you actually demonstrated on your dog. The only improvement I would say is to just try and make it a little more fluid, but I also know it’s just your rough draft.
I thought this was a very good speech and also your dog is adorable. You’re tone was very clear and it was easy to tell that you knew exactly what you were talking about. I also really like how you emphasized the importance of making it a positive experience for the dog. This was very good for a rough draft, also please give the dog another treat for me he is literally the cutest.
What a fantastic skill to teach! Many people do not know how to trim dogs’ nails, and it’s a valuable skill for pet owners to have. I liked that you listed every item you will need before beginning the process, and you broke the steps down very clearly. For your final draft, make sure to run through your speech a couple of times making sure it’s nice and smooth.
This is my Link!
https://youtu.be/TqPkP2zVphY
I thought that was really good. Your voice was nice and clear. I also thought you did really good explaining all of your steps. It did make me want to journal! I think if you could it could be helpful to include maybe how you stay motivated or how you remember to do it everyday.
I really like the skill you chose, I think you did a very good job of explaining not only how to journal but why it is important and how it can be used to both just rant and point out some positive aspects of your day/week. Overall, I think the structure of your speech flowed very well and I thought it was a very well done rough draft.
This was a great speech. I liked the organization of the speech and the clear delivery. I think it could be beneficial to include more info about the benefits of journalling, it’s such a helpful practice!
Here is my link: https://youtu.be/QqVbTwcJqyM
that is a really cool skill. I liked how you showed the other earrings you had made (they were cute!). You spoke clearly and it didn’t seem like you were reading off of a script. I would say maybe try and find a longer one so you could demonstrate making the earring in the final video
I liked that you told your audience that it’s much easier than it looks to make earrings. At first, I was shocked you could teach us this skill in such a short video, but you did a great job of breaking down the steps. You mentioned were a few of your items were from which was great! I would love to know where to purchase everything I will need for this project (craft store? online?…)
This was a great speech and such a creative skill to teach. I liked how you delivered the speech in a casual, conversational way. I also liked the simple and clear explanation of the skill. If it’s possible to show how you use the tool on an earring, I think that would be helpful to see.