This is so cool! I absolutely love yoga. I think it is so cool you are an instructor to little kids. Its a cute full circle moment. I can feel how much you love yoga, but I think it could be helpful to find a few facts about how yoga is beneficial. Like if there is any research about it. I also think you could say how YouTube has so many yoga classes on it too. But overall really cool topic, I felt your love of yoga, and it made me want to do yoga immediately.
I love this topic and all the great points you made! Talking about your personal experience with yoga made your message more convincing. I think using pictures of the props and some poses could be helpful to your speech. I definitely want to try aerial yoga now!
I really like the topic you chose for your speech because I too love yoga! I think you did a very good job of explaining the importance of yoga in your own life and how we often overlook the benefits of relaxation. I thought this was a very good speech, I do agree that it could be cool if you added facts about yoga and how the practice can benefit you but that’s just me nitpicking!
This was a great topic because it seems very relevant, but I’ve haven’t heard a lot about it. I loved the way you engaged the audience at the beginning. I can tell you are knowledgeable about the subject. The visuals were super helpful to understand your points, but I think taking more time to show the images while explaining them could be helpful.
I really liked your speech, I think you picked a great topic because it was very entertaining and interesting to hear about but also you could tell that you were excited to be talking about it which is what I think really made the speech. I thought you seemed pretty relaxed but confident in your delivery and tone. If you wanted to add more to the speech I think it would be cool to hear more stories of cases you’ve seen from working at an oral surgeon office because that was one of my favorite parts of the speech.
Hi Reese! I really enjoyed your video (especially your introduction!) I loved that you engaged with your audience right off the bat, and followed up by establishing credibility and what your topic of this video is. I can definitely relate to jaw clenching and found this video very helpful, and I learned a lot. I would love to see your images a bit more clearly in your final video!
I thought this was a cool topic! I am vegan so I definitely care a lot about this issue. I think your images were very well chosen. I think if you want you can try and touch upon some of the negative health effects that eating animal products has been showing. Overall super awesome tho!
This is a very important topic and I think you did a great job showing you were well educated on the subject and you can tell that it is important to you. I also thought you had very good visuals to support what you were saying. I think it would be really interesting if in the part where you talk about reducing the amount of meat in your diet you talked a little about your own personal experience with becoming vegetarian.
Very powerful video Caitlin. I am sure lots of your audience has had similar experiences to you. The graphics you included in your speech were definitely impactful and the facts you included made me think more about my meat consumption. In your final, you could maybe address the audience directly in some way, maybe asking your audience to pause and think about their meat consumption? Overall, really strong speech!
I think this is a good topic! I thought you had some really good facts like how sloths have an entire ecosystem. Also I like how you said planting one tree adds one tree that wasn’t there before. I think if you work on finding some visuals then your speech will be really awesome!
This is such an important topic and you had great points about it! I liked how you added numerical facts to support your points. Talking about watching tons of nature documentaries is very relatable, so I think this helps connect with the audience. I think adding visuals of cute sloths and land before vs after deforestation would be helpful and persuading!
I love how comfortable you are talking to your audience, your words flow nicely and I can tell you have strong opinions on deforestation. I like that you establish credibility by explaining how long you have been fascinated by this topic. I always feel that if someone has been learning about something since childhood, they must be knowledgeable on the topic. Adding before and after images of the forests would be really helpful, so your audience can truly see what is being impacted.
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This is the link to my first draft of speech #5!!
– https://youtu.be/eGPL4yRmqhU
This is so cool! I absolutely love yoga. I think it is so cool you are an instructor to little kids. Its a cute full circle moment. I can feel how much you love yoga, but I think it could be helpful to find a few facts about how yoga is beneficial. Like if there is any research about it. I also think you could say how YouTube has so many yoga classes on it too. But overall really cool topic, I felt your love of yoga, and it made me want to do yoga immediately.
I love this topic and all the great points you made! Talking about your personal experience with yoga made your message more convincing. I think using pictures of the props and some poses could be helpful to your speech. I definitely want to try aerial yoga now!
I really like the topic you chose for your speech because I too love yoga! I think you did a very good job of explaining the importance of yoga in your own life and how we often overlook the benefits of relaxation. I thought this was a very good speech, I do agree that it could be cool if you added facts about yoga and how the practice can benefit you but that’s just me nitpicking!
here’s my link: https://youtu.be/T44Tz_izEJI
This was a great topic because it seems very relevant, but I’ve haven’t heard a lot about it. I loved the way you engaged the audience at the beginning. I can tell you are knowledgeable about the subject. The visuals were super helpful to understand your points, but I think taking more time to show the images while explaining them could be helpful.
I really liked your speech, I think you picked a great topic because it was very entertaining and interesting to hear about but also you could tell that you were excited to be talking about it which is what I think really made the speech. I thought you seemed pretty relaxed but confident in your delivery and tone. If you wanted to add more to the speech I think it would be cool to hear more stories of cases you’ve seen from working at an oral surgeon office because that was one of my favorite parts of the speech.
Hi Reese! I really enjoyed your video (especially your introduction!) I loved that you engaged with your audience right off the bat, and followed up by establishing credibility and what your topic of this video is. I can definitely relate to jaw clenching and found this video very helpful, and I learned a lot. I would love to see your images a bit more clearly in your final video!
https://youtu.be/32QnvthzUSE
I thought this was a cool topic! I am vegan so I definitely care a lot about this issue. I think your images were very well chosen. I think if you want you can try and touch upon some of the negative health effects that eating animal products has been showing. Overall super awesome tho!
This is a very important topic and I think you did a great job showing you were well educated on the subject and you can tell that it is important to you. I also thought you had very good visuals to support what you were saying. I think it would be really interesting if in the part where you talk about reducing the amount of meat in your diet you talked a little about your own personal experience with becoming vegetarian.
Very powerful video Caitlin. I am sure lots of your audience has had similar experiences to you. The graphics you included in your speech were definitely impactful and the facts you included made me think more about my meat consumption. In your final, you could maybe address the audience directly in some way, maybe asking your audience to pause and think about their meat consumption? Overall, really strong speech!
here is my link to my dry run for speech 5: https://youtu.be/YHFcuTBr9u8
(I still have to include my two visuals )
I think this is a good topic! I thought you had some really good facts like how sloths have an entire ecosystem. Also I like how you said planting one tree adds one tree that wasn’t there before. I think if you work on finding some visuals then your speech will be really awesome!
This is such an important topic and you had great points about it! I liked how you added numerical facts to support your points. Talking about watching tons of nature documentaries is very relatable, so I think this helps connect with the audience. I think adding visuals of cute sloths and land before vs after deforestation would be helpful and persuading!
I love how comfortable you are talking to your audience, your words flow nicely and I can tell you have strong opinions on deforestation. I like that you establish credibility by explaining how long you have been fascinated by this topic. I always feel that if someone has been learning about something since childhood, they must be knowledgeable on the topic. Adding before and after images of the forests would be really helpful, so your audience can truly see what is being impacted.