I think you did a really good job at explaining the steps and what colors you should use. As someone who doesn’t wear eyeshadow because I never learned how, I feel like I can now apply it on myself the correct way! I also think you did a good job at talking slowly and reaching the 3 minute mark. I can’t think of anything you could improve on other than starting from scratch to show us the before and after but I think the way you did it had the same effect by applying the colors over what you already did!
Nice job on your video. I thought you did a really great job explaining all the steps you need to go through to get the right coloring for your eyes. You were also very clear in what you were saying too which is showing some amount of confidence when you are speaking. I would say one thing to maybe change or work on is just showing a little bit more confidence than you already had in this video. This could come with possibly bringing a little bit more energy to the video which would go hand in hand with the amount of confidence shown.
I used to be really into makeup, and watching this tutorial was a really cute throwback to when I would do mine in the morning. Makeup is a really cool talent, and even though I don’t typically wear it anymore, it’s awesome to see that you are invested in it. You did a great job explaining clearly and slowly, though I do wish you had been able to show us as you did it- maybe too time consuming (though perhaps just on one eye would work)? I think being a little more upbeat/confident would really sell the ability that you have, and would bring your video together nicely.
I didn’t have rugby at my high school so I am not familiar with it, so I never knew that’s how you threw a rugby ball! I think you did a good job at showing the different positions of throwing and how they differ. I know your skill is throwing the ball but as someone who doesn’t know rugby well I think you could add in the rules of the game. You did a good job at hitting the 3 minute mark so you also don’t have to I just think it would be interesting!
Hi! You really seem like you know your skill. You did a really good job at describing how to throw the ball. It was very easy to listen to. The only thing that I would say is that you might want to take shorter pauses instead of longer ones while presenting. I think this will make the audience more likely to listen.
I’ve never played rugby, but I’ve always thought it was a cool sport, and you really seemed passionate about it, which made your video interesting to watch. I agree with Fiona- shorter pauses between ideas might help the audience focus on what you’re saying. I think you explained the how-to really well though, and I genuinely enjoyed watching your video.
This brought back so many memories! I use to make them all the time and I completely forgot how to but I think you did a really good job of explaining the steps so now I think I will be able to make one again. I enjoyed this speech and I think you have a really good energy. I can’t think of anything you could improve on other than the time, I think it said no more than 5 minutes but that’s amazing you got it that long!
Hi Beanie! You did a really great job at explaining how to fold the fortune teller. I liked that you took it slow so the audience could follow along easily. I noticed that your speech was a little bit over 5 minutes long. Maybe you could cut down on the conclusion a little so you still have time to explain the folding process. I think you did a great job and have a great skill!
Wow I haven’t seen or made one of these in so long! You did a great job with explaining how too make a fortune teller and everything was at a great pace and easy to follow. You also did so well with the storytelling because as you were showing it you were sharing how most of us used these all throughout elementary school and it just brought. flood of memories in for me. I think if you were to cut down a little bit on your pauses in between each thought you could get under that 5 minute marker, but other than that this was a great video!
Hi Wylie! That looks like a great copy cat recipe. I liked how you mentioned that making coffee at home is less costly. Maybe you can go through your ingredients before you start to reach three minutes. I loved the way you had everything you needed out and ready. You seemed very prepared. Good job!
I completely agree with you that some of these coffee places are so expensive for a cup of coffee. You had a very clear voice and you spoke loud which made it very easy to understand and hear what you were saying. You showed a lot of confidence when you spoke too which is what a lot of great videos need! For you to be able to hit the 3 minute mark I would say that you could slow down the pace in which you are talking a little bit and I don’t know how long it takes to make the espresso or if you make it or buy it, but you could show how its made or just explain what you have on the table prior to starting the process of making it, so you can just explain the steps you are going through as you make it.
Howdy! Timing is such a tricky issue- maybe speak a little slower to help buy a few more seconds. Another thing that might help in this specific case is going more in depth about the components or ingredients in your espresso, or even how you make your espresso! It’s a really cool process if you pull your own shots, and even if you use an instant machine like a Keurig, it would be neat to hear what brand you prefer.
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https://youtu.be/hPtVscld1Kc
Hi guys! This is my link for speech three.
I think you did a really good job at explaining the steps and what colors you should use. As someone who doesn’t wear eyeshadow because I never learned how, I feel like I can now apply it on myself the correct way! I also think you did a good job at talking slowly and reaching the 3 minute mark. I can’t think of anything you could improve on other than starting from scratch to show us the before and after but I think the way you did it had the same effect by applying the colors over what you already did!
Nice job on your video. I thought you did a really great job explaining all the steps you need to go through to get the right coloring for your eyes. You were also very clear in what you were saying too which is showing some amount of confidence when you are speaking. I would say one thing to maybe change or work on is just showing a little bit more confidence than you already had in this video. This could come with possibly bringing a little bit more energy to the video which would go hand in hand with the amount of confidence shown.
I used to be really into makeup, and watching this tutorial was a really cute throwback to when I would do mine in the morning. Makeup is a really cool talent, and even though I don’t typically wear it anymore, it’s awesome to see that you are invested in it. You did a great job explaining clearly and slowly, though I do wish you had been able to show us as you did it- maybe too time consuming (though perhaps just on one eye would work)? I think being a little more upbeat/confident would really sell the ability that you have, and would bring your video together nicely.
Here my link for Speech 3.
https://youtu.be/zAbIb_BBlUI
I didn’t have rugby at my high school so I am not familiar with it, so I never knew that’s how you threw a rugby ball! I think you did a good job at showing the different positions of throwing and how they differ. I know your skill is throwing the ball but as someone who doesn’t know rugby well I think you could add in the rules of the game. You did a good job at hitting the 3 minute mark so you also don’t have to I just think it would be interesting!
Hi! You really seem like you know your skill. You did a really good job at describing how to throw the ball. It was very easy to listen to. The only thing that I would say is that you might want to take shorter pauses instead of longer ones while presenting. I think this will make the audience more likely to listen.
I’ve never played rugby, but I’ve always thought it was a cool sport, and you really seemed passionate about it, which made your video interesting to watch. I agree with Fiona- shorter pauses between ideas might help the audience focus on what you’re saying. I think you explained the how-to really well though, and I genuinely enjoyed watching your video.
https://youtu.be/37W0oNWrC1Y
This brought back so many memories! I use to make them all the time and I completely forgot how to but I think you did a really good job of explaining the steps so now I think I will be able to make one again. I enjoyed this speech and I think you have a really good energy. I can’t think of anything you could improve on other than the time, I think it said no more than 5 minutes but that’s amazing you got it that long!
Hi Beanie! You did a really great job at explaining how to fold the fortune teller. I liked that you took it slow so the audience could follow along easily. I noticed that your speech was a little bit over 5 minutes long. Maybe you could cut down on the conclusion a little so you still have time to explain the folding process. I think you did a great job and have a great skill!
Wow I haven’t seen or made one of these in so long! You did a great job with explaining how too make a fortune teller and everything was at a great pace and easy to follow. You also did so well with the storytelling because as you were showing it you were sharing how most of us used these all throughout elementary school and it just brought. flood of memories in for me. I think if you were to cut down a little bit on your pauses in between each thought you could get under that 5 minute marker, but other than that this was a great video!
I didn’t hit the 3 min mark so any ideas of what I could do to lengthen my video is much appreciated!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nx7aVhRs3fw
Hi Wylie! That looks like a great copy cat recipe. I liked how you mentioned that making coffee at home is less costly. Maybe you can go through your ingredients before you start to reach three minutes. I loved the way you had everything you needed out and ready. You seemed very prepared. Good job!
I completely agree with you that some of these coffee places are so expensive for a cup of coffee. You had a very clear voice and you spoke loud which made it very easy to understand and hear what you were saying. You showed a lot of confidence when you spoke too which is what a lot of great videos need! For you to be able to hit the 3 minute mark I would say that you could slow down the pace in which you are talking a little bit and I don’t know how long it takes to make the espresso or if you make it or buy it, but you could show how its made or just explain what you have on the table prior to starting the process of making it, so you can just explain the steps you are going through as you make it.
Howdy! Timing is such a tricky issue- maybe speak a little slower to help buy a few more seconds. Another thing that might help in this specific case is going more in depth about the components or ingredients in your espresso, or even how you make your espresso! It’s a really cool process if you pull your own shots, and even if you use an instant machine like a Keurig, it would be neat to hear what brand you prefer.