This speech and your delivery was amazing! You had a clear thesis and your points were organized well, so it was super easy to follow. I think the way you spoke was perfect for a toast, it was casual and light-hearted. I think using more specific examples, like what makes him funny would be great to add.
I loved how you delivered this speech, very confidently and clearly. I also liked that you talked about your younger brother, I noticed lots of the other speeches discussed someone older who they looked up to but you discussed the amazing qualities that your younger brother has. I would love to hear more funny stories about your brother, try and make your audience laugh!
I thought your speech was organized very well. I like how you structured it sort of like an essay where you had a clear thesis and three main points. I thought you also did a great job expanding on your three main points. If anything I would maybe just add a little more so the speech is longer but other than that I thought it was really good.
This was a very strong speech. You used lots of great adjectives to describe your mom and you delivered them in a powerful way. I would love to hear more stories about your mom, that way your speech will be long enough to fit the length requirement.
I love how genuine this is! All of your words seemed so well thought out. I liked how your main points worked together to support your thesis. I think she obviously means so much and I get that. I think you should try and maybe add hand gestures or something of that sort just to add more emotion. Like when you say how she was the loudest on the sidelines you do a big smile, and that was awesome.
This was a very good speech! I feel like you did a really good job giving your audience an idea of the kind of person your mom is. I also really liked the examples you gave such as how she helps you study and constantly supports you, it really added depth to your speech.
This was a fantastic first run of your speech. I liked all the specific stories about your mom that you included, it made the speech very descriptive and helped the audience understand your mom even better. Make sure to run through your speech a couple more times, following an outline helps me keep myself on topic and helps my speech flow more easily.
The tennis story was so good. I thought it was endearing and showed how kind your mom is. She seems like a girl boss and I think you did a great speech. Your points were great! I think you could try and utilize some pauses in your speech that can help emphasize some of her great traits even more.
This was a great speech! The examples you used made your speech interesting. I also liked how you had distinct main points to make the speech organized. I think incorporating some more eye contact would help you connect with the audience.
I can really feel your love. And I like how you defined /called her your “bonus grandma”. I think you has good points. Maybe add a sweet story about her that can bring a big smile, but I thought it was really good.
The content and delivery of this speech were great! I could really feel your emotion through your speech and all your points were well organized. I think adding a meaningful story would help show the audience who she is.
I thought your speech was very inspiring and very well delivered. I loved how you refer to her as your “bonus grandma” and I think you did a very great job painting a picture of her. I also agree that adding a meaningful story or memory to your speech could help with your main points but overall I thought this was a very good dry run!
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This speech and your delivery was amazing! You had a clear thesis and your points were organized well, so it was super easy to follow. I think the way you spoke was perfect for a toast, it was casual and light-hearted. I think using more specific examples, like what makes him funny would be great to add.
I loved how you delivered this speech, very confidently and clearly. I also liked that you talked about your younger brother, I noticed lots of the other speeches discussed someone older who they looked up to but you discussed the amazing qualities that your younger brother has. I would love to hear more funny stories about your brother, try and make your audience laugh!
I thought your speech was organized very well. I like how you structured it sort of like an essay where you had a clear thesis and three main points. I thought you also did a great job expanding on your three main points. If anything I would maybe just add a little more so the speech is longer but other than that I thought it was really good.
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This was a very strong speech. You used lots of great adjectives to describe your mom and you delivered them in a powerful way. I would love to hear more stories about your mom, that way your speech will be long enough to fit the length requirement.
I love how genuine this is! All of your words seemed so well thought out. I liked how your main points worked together to support your thesis. I think she obviously means so much and I get that. I think you should try and maybe add hand gestures or something of that sort just to add more emotion. Like when you say how she was the loudest on the sidelines you do a big smile, and that was awesome.
This was a very good speech! I feel like you did a really good job giving your audience an idea of the kind of person your mom is. I also really liked the examples you gave such as how she helps you study and constantly supports you, it really added depth to your speech.
Here is my link: https://youtu.be/ge9OdwO5aOA
This was a fantastic first run of your speech. I liked all the specific stories about your mom that you included, it made the speech very descriptive and helped the audience understand your mom even better. Make sure to run through your speech a couple more times, following an outline helps me keep myself on topic and helps my speech flow more easily.
The tennis story was so good. I thought it was endearing and showed how kind your mom is. She seems like a girl boss and I think you did a great speech. Your points were great! I think you could try and utilize some pauses in your speech that can help emphasize some of her great traits even more.
This was a great speech! The examples you used made your speech interesting. I also liked how you had distinct main points to make the speech organized. I think incorporating some more eye contact would help you connect with the audience.
This is my link!: https://youtu.be/Bj9iIRbw4wU
I can really feel your love. And I like how you defined /called her your “bonus grandma”. I think you has good points. Maybe add a sweet story about her that can bring a big smile, but I thought it was really good.
The content and delivery of this speech were great! I could really feel your emotion through your speech and all your points were well organized. I think adding a meaningful story would help show the audience who she is.
I thought your speech was very inspiring and very well delivered. I loved how you refer to her as your “bonus grandma” and I think you did a very great job painting a picture of her. I also agree that adding a meaningful story or memory to your speech could help with your main points but overall I thought this was a very good dry run!